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White Love by marieceleste White Love by marieceleste
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White Love

I immediately fell in love the first time I saw it
My heart went thump, thump, thump, thud, thud, thud,
I saw those immaculate white uniforms
I was reminded of an angel

I walked my way to nowhere
I saw you picking up fallen flowers
I stopped out of curiosity
You turned to me and gave a warm smile
Right then and there, I felt I’ve known you for long

It was a meadow out of nowhere
Where the world seemed perfect
Away from the events of the city
And the only lights are those from fireflies

The sun was setting, the meadow was full of orange rays
You suddenly reappeared by my side
You had your sailing uniform on
The one I always saw in my daydreams

You handed me a pinwheel of many colors
Contrasting against your white attire
You gently blew it in the direction of the wind
It gave soft twirls like the clouds above us
With every spin, it took my pains away

I didn’t realize my little dream would come true
I finally have my own angel beside me
The one who wears an all-white uniform
Ready to cross the sky and the sea with me
And finally, I have a destination.

3/8/2010 10:25:46 PM

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There was a maritime school nearby my former high school and everytime I would go home I would always see the students there in their all-white uniforms. I have always been fascinated and in love with those uniforms. And indeed, my heart would go thump, thump, thump, thud, thud, thud, whenever I would see one. I'd like to try wearing it but I don't think it'll suit me. So, I just thought that it may be nice to someday fall in love with someone who wears that uniform. Hahaha! Shallow reason, I know.

Personally, though, I wanna be a pilot than a maritime official. (but I don't think I have a chance anymore 'cause I have poor eyesight. Boo!)

[Oh, yes! Paper by The Heritage Hotel. I took the photo when we stayed there... Hahaha!]
[Used CatholicSchoolGirls as main font... I just typed the poem there, it wasn't really written on the paper.]

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:iconartifice-child:
artifice-child Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2010
fantastic visual-poetry style! LOVE the fact that the photo AND poem are yours.
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marieceleste Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you!

I'm glad you liked both the poem and the photo!

:)
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ForYourself Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2010
You have such perfect handwriting
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marieceleste Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
[Used CatholicSchoolGirls as main font... I just typed the poem there, it wasn't really written on the paper.]

:)
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astronobish Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2010
XD Heritage Manila. Hello there fellow Filipino. Nice to meet you.

I quite like this poem, it was sweet and interesting, and I love the imagery.
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marieceleste Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
hello, fellow filipino! :D

It's nice that you liked this, Thank you! :)
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urban-lingo Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
(: I've been to that hotel before! hahah. damnnn. small world. & damn i :heart the 4th stanza.
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marieceleste Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
really? that's great! are you also filipino?
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:iconurban-lingo:
urban-lingo Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Sadly no, I stayed on a visit there cause my flight got canceled :/ it was a nice place though xD
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marieceleste Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
yup, they have nice rooms...

:)
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